by Jayhawker12
once again..your post had hottt possibility...but once again..there was absolutely NO EROTICISM!!!! totally lacked any sex-charged dialogue/action..exactly like... in your previous story..take your scenerio ideas and add hottttt dialogue/build-up of action/and make it "smokin hottttt" ! ! ! dad/son fun is hotttttt! ! ! especially if mom is involved...nothing hotter than mom/bi dad..sharing jock/stud son...
This, along with the authors previous posting, represents an all too short effort to portray the joys and pleasures of Father/Son incestuous relationships.
Stories dealing with this aspect of familial sexual attraction are much too rare in the voluminous entries in the Incest-Taboo category
The author shows promise and it would be nice to see him continue to explore this theme and to do so at length. I feel sure that there are many readers who would welcome more stories on this theme.
This subject deserves a much lengthier treatment. This is a fine start but is too short to portray the attraction between Father and Son. The author obviously has an understanding of this attraction but needs to develop it at much greater length.
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I enjoyed the story. I'd like to give a few tips. When writing in the first person from a teens perspective, you might want to spend a little time researching teenage slang.
By inserting young people's dialect it will help the story line and create believability.
Also proofread, proofread, proofread,, there are a number of errors.
I did find the story very exciting. Thank You for posting it.
07502112526.... Son here!! Seeking a Daddy!!!!
great how a old man lets young boy experiement by sucking. I wish I had a older gernt to suck me off when I was oung
I enjoyed your story and look forward to some more like it. I had M2M with my Uncle when I was a young teenager. Since the father taught the son about gay sex Maybe he learned from his father the same thing. Maybe in a story the Grandfather could join for a threesome Keep writing.