by RedLegoDragon
Could have been shortened to 5 pages. So much repetition so much repetition so much repetition. Good action, though.
A Sordid Arrangement is a blazing drama about passion and finding true love in the end. Great characters and and a swiftly moving plot line are highlights this excellent story.
Great fucking, though too long sometimes - we don't need several cowgirls in the row. Angry fucking from Erin and Kyle carrying her around fucking against walls are thr hottest.
Glad everyone's been enjoying this story! Took me a while to finally finish a piece of erotica that I was happy to publish on Lit, and this one turned out pretty decent in the end.
There will be a sequel.
I'm fucking exhausted after reading this! My imagination is tired after all that heavy lifting! Holy shit. I feel dehydrated just thinking about the sheer volume of fluids involved. Incredible.
I want Erin and Kyle to fuck until the room literally tears apart. Both times they stop fucking for convenience, I believe they would fuck for days straight on if they could.
17 pages too many. Kyle is a jock asshole with a big dick who fucks everything on 2 legs. Peter is a fat nerd with a regular dick trying to survive a bad roommate, Erin is a frustrated airhead who’s getting off on the big dick roommate and cheating on boyfriend/fiancé without remorse…here we go in a paragraph.