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But please get an editor.

It would really help if you wrote in sentences and used standard grammar and spelling.

Agree. You really need an editor.

While some may snipe about an editor, remember one thing. While I was reading your story I badly wanted to be one of the men in the story. In my opinion that is what erotica is all about. While I would encourage you to take advantage of using an editor, keep producing this level of great story lines.