All Comments on 'A Space Odyssey Ch. 01'

by ElaaraWylder

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ElaaraWylderElaaraWylderabout 12 years agoAuthor

HI Bumcleaver - thanks for your feedback! Keep reading and I'm sure you will get to know Creel and his crew very well!

bumcleaverbumcleaverabout 12 years ago
Lots of action, but...

There's a lot action and description here, but I want to know more about these characters. Right now it just feels like a catalogue of actions.

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