All Comments on 'A Spanish Beauty'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Mmmmm

Very fucking hot. That was a great description of a blowjob. I want to see him pull off her dress, make her face the stage while she sat on his lap and got fucked

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 11 years ago
Loved the setting & sense of history interspersed with soiling & despoiling of an innocent !

They say in economic hard times, a recession is just a garage sale for the rich. Ergo the unhindered, unconscionable power playsThere's more to this story, these two are not through with each other. If we're. lucky, doitright will continue this saga.

I really enjoyed the Euro locale and would like to know more specifics in terms of date & culture nuances in tandem with the carnality.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Amazing

An absolutely brilliant story, it is written with so much care and attention. Definitely one of my favourite stories on here! I would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Bravissimo!

★★★★★+ (5.5=110%, "Above expectations!)

This story was brilliantly conceived and very skillfully crafted. It is erotic,

I see Beatriz as a ripe fruit from a magic garden ready to be plucked.

Señor Chingar is rich, powerful, spoiled, and feels entitled to things, jobs and people he wants to have.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It is a five star story [🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5.0)]

but we must not forget how the girl was impacted.

This submission is more than a sex story.

Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT):

"For the rest of the night he kept his hands to himself, but she couldn't help but weep silently, every now and then wiping a tear with her sleeve, and thinking of how suddenly her life had changed."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very very erotic and totally true to life.

This non-consent story gets a 5.0 (100%).

👍👍!

Beatriz (❤), who is totally a keeper, gets

a 5.5 (110%). 👍👍! ❤!

😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

☆☆☆☆☆ (five)!

Erotic and realistic, two in one.

doitright is a good writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Bravo! Love it! om

I gave the story a 5 (5.0=100%, ★★★★★)!

As to Beatriz's character, I gave her a

5+ (5.25 = 105%, ★★★★★+)!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

❤💚❤💚❤ (5.0)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

5.0 = 100%

MAJESTY210MAJESTY210over 2 years ago

I loved it I just wanted more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I am copy pasting an excerpt from a user comment:

"LordSlamdawgg, over 9 years ago

Loved the setting & sense of history interspersed with soiling & despoiling of an innocent !

They say in economic hard times, a recession is just a garage sale for the rich. Ergo the unhindered, unconscionable power plays..."

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My comment:

"Power corrupts. Absolute power corrupts absolutely."

A girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I am copy pasting another user's comment.

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Anonymous, about 9 years ago

Amazing

An absolutely brilliant story, it is written with so much care and attention. Definitely one of my favourite stories on here! I would love to read more

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