All Comments on 'A Spanking for You'

... you really should look up when to use 'lie' and when to use 'lay'. They are not interchangeable; Dylan and Clapton were both wrong in their song-titles - so were you.

It spoiled a great story, so four stars where it could so easily have been five. I hope there might be more to come - thanks.

I read stories to relax. I don't read them to worry about a few English mistakes. I don't think these stories are ment to be handed in for credit in an English class.