All Comments on 'A Special Anniversary'

by Helaran

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Pretty good but -

where is the non-consensual or reluctance part and if they are married why does he go to her house?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I'm also confused

If they were married, how come he went to her house in the first part of the story?

If he had a plan, why did he wonder about it later as if he had no plan and had to get her fantasy to make a plan? These really detracted from the story which could have been pretty good otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
huh?

they got married after a few years but he has to drive to her house and knock? lol hmm

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