by Zenkci
Needs Serious Grammar Check……
The Good News is that I do Like the Story I really Do mainly because I Really haven’t read very many stories or at all about Forced Male Sex Slavery, and with that said I really want to get into the story I really do, but however that Sadly Brings me to the Negative Side and there are quit a few. The First is that as I have Mentioned The Grammar Whenever I Hit a Grammar Issue it Really Takes Me Out Of The Story, it really does Sadly. The Second thing is that In My Opinion you Probably could Combine the First Three Chapters in to one, but that part was fine I’m just saying if it where I would have done that, and the Third and Final thing is that
But Overall Lovely Story Loved the Descriptions
Excellent story can't wait to read more of Mike's downfall into slavery. I wonder what else Ted and his friends will do to him.
I really liked the story. BUT as a german person your try to say something in german put me off...
I've been really waited for this story to continue please can you finish it
great storie wanting to read more mike is in a good place would sure love to be him if any one looking
Im looking forward to the next chapters....please...!!!! I want to know what happens next...make it lot longer story...please!!!!!
I liked this series very much. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue that "rough" nasty style ;)