by CuddlyCoils
So much better than the first chapter. I can actually feel the relationship Ali and Billy have. Hopefully chapter 3 will be just as great.
Keep up the work. Awaiting more.
5 stars.
If Lit posted a list of Impressive, Promising new contributors, Cuddly Coils would surely be on it. I think we have a rising star here. Five stars.
I don't often look for sweet on this site, but this was delightful. I thought it was great. Kind of hope her fixation with him isn't based entirely around his firsts, but I don't think she's selfish like everyone else is suggesting.
Enjoyed this one a lot. Looking forward to seeing how she pulls it all off with him.