All Comments on 'A Special Love'

I would love to a read a sequel about these two beautiful women. Excellent story.

A WELL WRITTEN REALLY SEXY STORY THAT CERTAINLY GOT ME AROUSED.IAN

If there is then this story deserves it. Hot, sweet and credible, what more could we wish for? Keep it going, you've got the basis for a series - please!

Loving, warm, soft, gentle, beautiful, and at the same time powerfully expressive. That describes your story as well as your characters [and, I suspect, probably yourself]. There is a maxim that short story writers should always have in mind, and that is that the story itself - any story, not just an erotic one - follows the same pattern as good loving sex: it reaches a climax [orgasm] whose effect and intensity depends entirely on the quality of the build-up [foreplay]. You fulfilled this requirement brilliantly. Thank you for such intensely pleasurable reading. Freddy

Loving, warm, soft, gentle, beautiful, and at the same time powerfully expressive. That describes your story as well as your characters [and, I suspect, probably yourself]. There is a maxim that short story writers should always have in mind, and that is that the story itself - any story, not just an erotic one - follows the same pattern as good loving sex: it reaches a climax [orgasm] whose effect and intensity depends entirely on the quality of the build-up [foreplay]. You fulfilled this requirement brilliantly. Thank you for such intensely pleasurable reading. Freddy

Hi Lynn,

Just to let you know that your writing style is improving, so well done. I could imagine watching those two friends as they explore their friendship, expressing their affection more intimately.

Well done