by Lithium_hobo
Wow that was good. You realy have a good understanding of the characters and emotions.Please post more chapters soon.
i thought it was really good i enjoyed the development of character in the story. the first two were really sexual and extremely hot but this one is great. I still have wet dreams of Black cat, Bravo!!!
... You could make a bigger deal of the symbiont joining with Black Cat. After all, it's quite an intimate happening, oozing into her every opening...
But then that's my personal freak-on going there so YMMV. ;-)
Revisiting the whole symbiote joining Black Cat thing could be a good idea. It's not too bizarre for me to write about, and would just border on masturbation on her part.
Perhaps I will do something like that. A Chapter 3 - Lost Scenes post. Thanks for the suggestion!