All Comments on 'A Stablehand is Always Good Help'

Great little story, easy to read and imagine. Loved it!

This was a good effort for a first story but could be improved, firstly by not changing tense too often and secondly not relying on spellcheck too much.EG. decide for decided, main for mane, gentleman for servant, (A servant can behave like a gentleman but he cannot be one!),

fell for feel. Apart from those fixable issues it was a simple story line well developed.