by fadingstar
It didn't strike me as very credible, it was very short and somehow sweet. I quite liked it and appreciated effort nonetheless
If you have quite a bit of time for reading, consider The Collector by John Fowles.
I liked this story and I'd like to see a sequel. It's obviously not a very credible story but who writes erotic stories for realism? Fantasies are fantasies. They need not be constrained by reality. I really like how both Austin and Kelsey surrender to their instinctual urges and shed the burdens of society. A man and woman agreeably mating like animals without social constructs like consent or propriety.
This is so wholesome and erotic at the same time! I absolutely loved it !