All Comments on 'A Starry Night'

Winch and wench are two VERY different things. Although both could be used to pull you in..... Use a dictionary and figure it out.

If everyone could have experiences like this, we'd all have a place to go in our minds when life gets too hard on us. Though for some, such as myself, often memories like that inspire emotions such as nostalgia rather than tender affection and love. Dictionary comment -- good advice...but the plot is very entrancing. For the next story it might be nice to jolt the reader by having us start amidst the action rather than setting it up blandly in the first few paragraphs. The end made it worth while. More writing like the end please. Good luck and merry writing! :)