by carbinemaster
Glad to hear that you and your wife are okay. And thank you for trying to lend a hand to our fellow Americans in the Caribbean.
Thanks for sharing your story, too. 5* Slainté
Well would you look who's back! Thanks for returning to this series and congrats for taking your time and doing some good for the world via Red Cross, even if you had your po-po hurt in the process.
The story however pick up just where you left us the last time and ups the ante a few notches in all aspects. Some events came a lot sooner than expected, like Jack getting out of jail, and other came completely out of left field, like Jack & Crystal hitting it off and her actually getting decent when greeting people. Speaking of Jack - I like him and his personality so I'm keeping fingers crossed that things work out with Crystal and Kayla in the long run, they all need some loving and a good person to take care of them when tough times strike.
5* with ease and despite some dark stuff ahead I can barely wait!
Welcome back! So happy to see this series continued, I agree with the other posters I hope Jack and Crystal do well in their new found relationship. My only complaint for this chapter is that it left me wanting more! Amazing job as usual. One of the few stories on here that really leaves me wanting more. Not because of the sex, but for the love between the two, can't help but to cheer for them!
Five stars all the way, looking forward to reading lots more of your work.
I love this story and look forward to each chapter. Always seems to end to soon. Lol
Sorry, but Crystal is a nasty whore! And she is taking up waaay too much space... Miss the lovestory between Kevin and Grace. Because that isn’t really there anymore.
I Love the roll she's Taken. I Love the way you portray her. I Love her daughter. I hope you write Jack, Crystal, and Kayla A Happy ending... Being from northern Kentucky and have the same name as our beloved HERO this whole story has truly captivated me and your talent has brought it to life. I have found much Joy, Laughter, and YES... TEARS
Some happy, some sorrowful, some of dread. I know its just a story BUT I forget sometimes its all in your head and not actual recounting of actual events
IT's THAT GOOD!!!
Please keep this universe going Chris sounds like He could work for Crystal in her protection service and Hannah could find a job with her as well I'm sure. ( Haven't read your Hannah's Hero story... YET and don't know if they are the same people) but it would be cool to find out the Chris and Hannah are related too.
Please keep up the good work. The action, the sex, and the plot are 100000000x better than they one page ten part stories or these one hit wonders or these stories that end on a cliffhanger or a promise for more.
too long anyway. Appreciate you taking the time to write such a heartwarning ans heartwrenching story. Loving it thank you
I have read both your stories My saving grace and a state of grace several times and can not wait for more. I hope you keep writing more
Love this entire series. I hope you're in good health and I hope you can keep writing
I swear many of these authors are teachers, seasonal workers, or something because many of these stories come like tsunamis from so many of these authors around summer vacation time for teachers and winter for summer workers (like day laborers, landscapers, pool cleaners, and northern construction workers). Maybe that's why we see CarbineMaster only at infrequent times of the year?
I know it was logical for them to end up together but i still kinda wish she had stayed single and Kevin and become Kayla's basically surrogate dad. I also liked the romantic/flirty way she behaved with Grace and Kevin. Thats just my feelings thou and the logical decision was the one you made so another 5 stars from me.
Well, so you had to appease ay. I guess we all need to do that sometimes, especially when we’re married. Okay, Grace gets to play touchy-feely with Carmen, now that put me on edge, made me a little worried. I remembered that Grace and Crystal had previously hooked up and Crystal had attempted to remove Grace’s panties while in bed. I kind of expected a hook-up with Jack and Crystal when I read she was coming along to pick him up. I was a little disappointed because I had hoped that Kevin would be the one to step up and continue to be Kayla’s daddy figure, especially after Crystal invited Grace and Kevin to stay with them. Now, Grace has not been getting any in a while and is feeling a bit needy, because Kevin has been recovering from being shot. I’m not saying that Grace is going to cheat, but it seems that Kevin keeps stepping up to whatever troubles that come up and pays a price while everyone else gets a feel, a grope and a squeeze. God I really hate Kelly.
That whole scene with Kayla... you sure do make it difficult to hold back the tears. Very well done I have to say.
I feel it for Crystal and Kayla. She really deserves to have love in her life, given all she has endured. And Kayla could use a father. I'm curious to see where this goes. Hopefully Jack is what they both need and they get to be a nice little happy family in the end.
I'm apprehensive about reading the next part. God only knows the depths of depravity that will be revealed regarding what Trent did on that night long ago with Elizabeth.