All Comments on 'A Steamy Chat 01'

good story

Short and simple. I like it.. Seems like you could do a good a really good story with the chat. Need to change 'to' to '2' so people don't expect 'too'. Need something to catch people's emotions -- how long have they been chatting? do they feel anything for each other? slide some back story in subtly, and add some more hot words to the sex and you're there! Cool story.