All Comments on 'A Step-Mom's New Life'

by Ghostwalker

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wes5028748wes5028748over 9 years ago
way it should be

LOVED this story ,hope to see more chapters!!!!!!!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 9 years ago
I thought it finished rather well

A Good story. Plenty to imagine. And plenty of erotica.

I haven't read the first version you alluded to, but this was very good.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 9 years ago

Loved the writing style. It was very descriptive. Very hot and sexy.

bocahalbocahalover 9 years ago

Loved the story,please try to continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more!

please continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Why a STEP MOM and not a real mom????????

Step relations stories do not belong in Incest/taboo.

Might as well describe teacher student sex as incest!

TheKrrakTheKrrakabout 8 years ago
Great read

A very nice story, with no jealousy that seems to crop up in other stories like this - people should just love one another, would solve a lot of the world's problems.

To the anon who doesn't understand why this is in this category - it's incest/taboo, while step-mom isn't technically incest it is MOST DEFINITELY taboo. And a story about a teacher could easily be in this category as well - for exactly the same reason.

jme51usajme51usaabout 8 years ago

Great Story, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
okay for the next chapter in this story hmmm???

loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great story and a good ending thanks

maxsteelemaxsteelealmost 8 years ago
You have proven them wrong

People have been saying that all your stories read the same. Well this story should prove them wrong. Also since your step mother is someone who marries your father, this is incest people. Does he really have to make this point on every step mother story he does. Finally is this story really done? Just wondering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
bravo!!!!

love your story need more follow ups to this one.. ty

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
loved

Loved

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very good and well told.

I think the story is very well put together and original by the way it is told.

I would suggest some separation marks when jumping into, and coming back from, a flashback. In this case the come back was a little unsure for a whole, until further reading. But I agree, written that way, maybe it grave ves a more immersing reading.

Good work !

Mobile49Mobile49over 3 years ago
Excellent

What a great, sexy story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Delicious. Wonderful love story. Thank you.

RamazaRamazaabout 2 years ago

I really like your work, but I have 1 question. Where on Earth do you replace a “ Yeah” or a “ Yes” with a “ Ya”???

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ja

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Thanks for sharing. 5*

mrdata9770mrdata97706 months ago

(11/4/2023) A combination of the step and throuple themes. Excellent!! You had me worried for a bit. It seemed Julie was going to steal Amanda away from Dale. I have only one critique. I wish the story was much longer. This narrative would have been perfect or a series. It goes on my list anyway. Thank you.

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