by Ghostwalker
A Good story. Plenty to imagine. And plenty of erotica.
I haven't read the first version you alluded to, but this was very good.
Step relations stories do not belong in Incest/taboo.
Might as well describe teacher student sex as incest!
A very nice story, with no jealousy that seems to crop up in other stories like this - people should just love one another, would solve a lot of the world's problems.
To the anon who doesn't understand why this is in this category - it's incest/taboo, while step-mom isn't technically incest it is MOST DEFINITELY taboo. And a story about a teacher could easily be in this category as well - for exactly the same reason.
People have been saying that all your stories read the same. Well this story should prove them wrong. Also since your step mother is someone who marries your father, this is incest people. Does he really have to make this point on every step mother story he does. Finally is this story really done? Just wondering.
I think the story is very well put together and original by the way it is told.
I would suggest some separation marks when jumping into, and coming back from, a flashback. In this case the come back was a little unsure for a whole, until further reading. But I agree, written that way, maybe it grave ves a more immersing reading.
Good work !
I really like your work, but I have 1 question. Where on Earth do you replace a “ Yeah” or a “ Yes” with a “ Ya”???
(11/4/2023) A combination of the step and throuple themes. Excellent!! You had me worried for a bit. It seemed Julie was going to steal Amanda away from Dale. I have only one critique. I wish the story was much longer. This narrative would have been perfect or a series. It goes on my list anyway. Thank you.