All Comments on 'A Stepmother's Permission'

An excellent begining. I hope there will be more to it as this start has gotten my curiousity piqued.

Once again, you see into my soul, the deepest part of my soul. How I wish I could be as lucky as Adam.

Please don't keep us in suspense. Bring on chapter 2 ASAP.

...and the earler voting suggested the tale wasn't appreciated; however, I can see there is now some interest in the story, and may write a second chapter. Thanks to all for the encouragement.

but thank god it's just a story!

Just great!

Nill

A really well done story. Makes one beg for more. so many possibilities. Not surprising in this age of stronger women. Taking the lead in so many ways, some figurative and one reality. Possible sale sounds great! A slave only knows when it no longer simply submits but serves without question. your male is a slave! A slave will always remember it's first collaring, leashing and exhibited! A sale and or gifting will enforce the permanence of servitude as well as it's worth! natural slaves are few, well treasured and kept securely but disciplined.

Women buying, selling, using males as property is always fun and proper to read without the reference to extremes like death. Could have been 5 stars without the obsession of murder.

The ultimate end of a true submissive is death. It's not an obsession; it's a "natural" outgrowth of the submissive mind. Yes, oh, yes, do continue and ignore those who fear their own death.

I've read some femdom stories in my day, but damn, this one's just plain hateful of males. It's extremely well composed, but the content is not my thing. Hate is hate, so Def not 5 stars.

excellent in everyway..only wished for more chapters..so am hoping another 5 sometime

soon.,as enough material available...would love to see him trained as toilet,which for me

so many writers stay away from,which is a shame..anyway overall brilliant..I will

familiarize myself with some of your other stories in the hope they are as good,or

better even?