All Comments on 'A Sticky Wicket Ch. 01'

ok how are you going to fuck this up because i know you will. the bitch has to have someone elses baby -

Don't fuck this up! Its good now, DON'T have her cheating or his ex creating problems.

It seems to me that this is a complete story. Everything that needed to happen did. Where do we go from here? I guess we'll see...

In honor of St. Patrick's Day please don't screw this fine tale up!!! Jack and Sarah are a loving family, don't destroy them!!

I am curious about his parents. No mention of them after his confrontation with the two pieces of trash. As far as Wendy is concerned, I hope she enjoys moving on and becoming the town bike.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story and look forward to the next chapter.

Awful. She is unfathomably stupid and an unbelievable character. The story is badly written. I couldn't care less about Jack or Sarah. Just stop

If your wife is fucking around, and doesn't show any real remorse, she probably wasn't covering it up very much. If she is doing gang bangs - there is no way she could be hiding it very well because she is clearly mentally ill! These stories never explain this disconnect between reality and perception.

Of a man worth knowing. Thanks to you Matt

Does this story really need more chapters? I don't think so. Not saying it wasn't diverting to read, but I think you got everything out in chapter 1, with no need to continue.

Very extreme. A very fitting story in and of itself. I can only assume that the last line means something bad is about to happen (if not enough already). Will the others seek revenge? Will Sarah become a cheat? I look forward to the rest.

I enjoyed this quick little ditty. I am curious about future chapters though.

The only thing missing was money from the law suits. Great job!!!

One error that stood out was never a convincing explaination for Wendy's affair with Steve and definitely no convincing expalination for Wendy letting Steve to talk her into a gangbang with her own husband's cricket club and his father. The author only said that Wendy felt she was stupid. In point of fact she was a complete idiot for most of her adult life, with her a married woman and balatant flirting which led her directly into the affair with Steve. The fact that she commmitted adultery with Steve even though she a great marraige with her husband suggests far more than stupidity was her problem. Let's try narcicisism which allowed her to use all the people around since she was the only one that mattered. The subsequent gangbang with 11 men was her at her height of narcisism.

He was clearly married to the most fantastic piece of ass in the village. Though a twenty man gang bang might have stretched believability a bit. But Wendy was a ravishing beauty and loved sex. What more could a husband ask for? Then he acts a fool and divorces her and marries a mere child, innocent and virginal. Oh there will be more chapters coming. How can all of you not see that? That sweet little Sarah is the spawn of Satan and was an expert on infidelity at age twelve.

As some others have said, you did not explain why Wendy wanted the gang bang or specifically why she wanted all of the cum to remain inside of her. Also, why would a doctor, who would know about STD's, participate in a bareback orgy? Your story has its own plot and you are within your right as a writer to skip some threads. Yet, readers still have a right to question why you simply did not add a few lines here or there to account for these holes.

I kinda agree. Unless you want to muck it up by having Sarah copy what Wendy did, I really can't see where more of a story is needed. Stories pretty much rely on the resolution of conflict.

Outside of what I mentioned about Sarah, the only conflict I can really see is a more pronounced resolution with Steve and his parents. The lack of any real follow-up of these relations is what the story lacks the most. There was no real mention of him dealing with the betrayal by his best friend and the scene with his parents was minimal at best.

One more thing. Who are these people (e.g., the vicar and his parents) who act put off when he slams them for what they did? The reactions by everyone else until the confrontation between Sarah and Wendy are laughable at best.

Thanks.

A very well written and edited revenge story.

I'm interested in to what is going to happen in chapter 2.

Hope to see it soon.

Thanks for the read.

first class, too good to merely be an erotic story in my opinion.

top drawer.

what wife would fuck a cricket team and why and how did she expect to get away with it.. is there anybody that stupid. yea its only a story

Your story did nothing for me. I don't understand why Wendy did it. I kind of understand why the father did it, but there seems to be no explanation about all of the other participants. It seems like this was just a poor stroke story. You neither wrote a character driven story, nor a good stroke story. You described Sarah's character and motivation well, and then made Wendy out to be some kind of unrepentent slut that felt it was important to do a roomful of men. It seemed out of character and he motivation was left unexplained. Did she want to play "Russian Roulette" regarding paternity? Why? One of your weaker stories, but you could fix it. I'd like that.

there isn't a woman as stupid as Wendy living anywhere outside an institution. The whole story fell apart with your portrayal of her - and there isn't a woman who's as sweet, devoted and innocent anywhere outside of a Stangstar tale ... oh, wait..... :))

So I guess that Wendy was a slut but I'm not sure why. And it seemed a bit much to have the Pastor, the Lawyer, his Father and his Mother involved. Did he quit his job?

Did he really have no further contact with his parents? Wendy showed up at the wedding? Too much and too little information all at the same time. Had to give this tale a two.

The child knew what she wanted and figured out how to get it -

Wendy was an idiot as well as a slut - but never really understood it -

His parents - just kill them sheesh -

She was a loving wife and even said i'm sorry.What's the matter with him?

Think of how it might affect the crickets team performance on the field.

I can't believe he wouldn't take the high road and forgive her.

ANON 'over the top' points out that Hubby worked in the family business ... owned and managed by his (randy) Dad. Hubby disowns his Mom & Dad. How in hell can he keep his job under Daddy after he knows Sweetie was also under Daddy? Beyond that, how can he keep his head high in that village? Especially if he isn't gainfully employed any more (and there is NO equivalent job opportunity in the small village!)

3* (and generous, at that!)

Well the British did invent the term 'over the top' and her behavior was all of that. Not erotic. and almost humerus, it fell short in both accounts.

“Jack. I am so very sorry you saw what you saw.”

LOL! She’s not sorry she DID it, she’s just sorry he saw it!

I can't help think that this was intended to be at least a LITTLE bit satirical, what with the involvement of his FATHER and the Vicar, and the knowledge of his mother, and the blame heaped on HIM!

Re-read this fine tale. She fucked her own father-in-law? And the priest who married them? What a cunt. Hopefully she gets hers.

I started to give it a 3 and then had to do 4 because of the ending!

As improbable as this story was, the character Sarah hit my fucking heart like a run away comet!

I have a fucking tear for Christ's sake!

Good story!

I agree with KarenE and her comments. Now, didn't he work in his dad's company? His mother approved of this gangbang of her sons wife? Sounds like mommy dearest was her own brand of slut. Why didn't he name her in the proceedings as an accomplice? If ever there was a poster child for the BTB crowd, this one was it! Burn everything and salt the earth.

My wife was 25...I was 38. We were married for 30 years.

I'm 84, my loving wife 71. We were married in January 1972. You figure it out.

with the prizes at the end freedom and new life

the American idiom "pulling a train." Or is it the same in Jolly Olde?

What was the author's intent of introducing going off the pill and the collection and retention of sperm? That wasn't developed well.

Only one thing worse then finding out your mates & your dad was fucking your wife & that is if they where also drinking your beer without replacing it, you can always find a new wife but a 11 mates is going to be hard to replace😂😂😂😂😂

"SCORE" "Score::: and the game continues. TK U MLJ LV NV

First the wife cheats, she cheats with Her husbands best friend, then major insult cheats with his father and his mother knew. She was horrible his doctor, lawyer and vicar. She was remarkable a whole TEAM!!

I'm surprised they're wasn't several murders.

It's a wonder any of the cheaters could breathe by themselves.

Wendy is single-handedly responsible for words like whore, tramp, slut, bitch, skank, etc. And Jack's Dad and Mom did not deserve air to breathe, let alone respect. I was hoping for a little more justice, retaliation and revenge for Jack. His father should lose the company to Jack and Sarah. Wendy, most likely got several STD's from her gangbang and passed it along from man to man, and they, in turn, spread it around the community. The cricket club, of course, had no alternative but to disband. The Cricket Club building would be bulldozed, as would the cricket field. That's good for starters.

fially a story where the whore of a woman is destory supid lying whores always lie about like guys always hiding their disgasting lesbian ways or cheating

normal life in an english village.

once new a wealthy gentleman farmer whos wife was getting boned senseless by the younger members of his staff, she was an attractive 60 and the youngest of her paramours was... well.... on work experience!

Good that he got rid of the cheating bitch Wendy, but why couldn't be have used a Cricket bat on Steve and the rest of his club. He could have shoved the sticky wicket up his old dad's arse.

Continuing through the Mattblack works, this is another one I enjoy. Wendy was whore who got off easy. Still say he should have dismembered Steve and old Dad.

How nice it is to read a piece written in the Queen’s English and set in places I know, and involving institutions I’m familiar with. Please keep writing.

In that understated style, you nailed this one to the CC notice board. The only way you might have made it funnier was to include their cricketing specialities - but I really can't think of any that would fit. Brilliant.

An 'owzat? and up goes the finger.

Thank you, sir.

Who is HARRY? The grandfather who died before Sara(h) was born? Hubby’s father was never named, that I could find.’. Neither was Sara(h)’s cheating father. Those would be Harry’s only granddads, and both were still alive long after Sarah was born! Hell, one of them fucked her! HER grandfather did die earlier, but that would be Harry’s great-gramps!

A liiiitle over the top - 11?!?

I loved it the rating system doesn't seem to work on my Chrome tablet running Firefox. I would give 5 stars.

@Lickideesplit, Harry was the late husband of the grandmother that Sarah was living with. HER grandfather, not Harry's!

She now works at Sluts R Us

I found this Story to be well written . Every now and then I like a Story like this One .

Sorry, but it should go into the sci-fi category. As usual, you start too many things and left them unresolved. You can't wrap up a plot like this in just two pages.

What happened about his job?.Did he still work at his father's firm and did Sarah still work there.Did he still live at Sarah's grandma's.?

Enjoyed it but would have liked to know more background on why Wendy would behave like she did. Agree with other commenter - What did he do for job? 4*

"If you'd just stayed at one lover, I might have been able to get over that." What a miserable cuck.

Great story. AAAAAA++++++

5 stars and worth every one. Good story and well written.

Great plot and an amazing twist with the 11 ASSHOLES, including his idiot father.

Who cares what happened afterwards - they are young, in love and with a new baby - living happily ever after.

Jack should have used his cricket bat on a few heads when he caught them, but he did get some revenge.

Did he still work for his father's firm?.If Wendy is still living in their house how does she pay for it,what does she do for money,she doesn't work?.

The stench of stupid on this is only surpassed by those who applaud it.

Seriously,,,,the cunt was so far over the top stupid its as if Matty knows how stupid the average reader here is. Even throwing in dear old dad. Some of you should be offended because he sees you as this fucking dumb.

C'mon all her "Im not the village bike" "We can get past this" "Why do you want a divorce" are you readers THAT stupid to cheer such weak and lazy half assed writing?

I thought the cucks were easily impressed but the BTB crowd is seemingly worse now.

The situation was too much of a cartoon to resonate. His father demanding respect? C’mon, just a caricature of people here. 3 stars for a decent set up. 1 star for the cheating scene and confrontation with the wife.

Why did Wendy agree to a gang bang, and believe that it would remain secret? Not believable! Three stars ⭐️ only. Too many questions were left unanswered.

5 Stars on a good story . My so called friend Steve's wife had 2 guys at a time in her . He took pictures ,using my camera . Her Mother was hand delivered some pictures . I paid 50 bucks to have that honor as I hated her and her Mother

His own parents betrayed him, even his mother knew about the gangbang beforehand!! What a shitshow with the village bicycle

Why are people critical of this?, It's a story for fucks sake, fiction, made up, just enjoy it for a bit of fun, it's not real!!!

Well done MattblackUk

Bluebirds!!

What a tale.

Did he continue as an employee of his father's company?

His father and mother....despicable trailer trash

A good tale but I never see the point of detailing the make and model of the car the MC drives in stories As the song says 'OK you've got a car ....'. Shame his parents didn't have to suffer a little though

What did Wendy expect to happen? using her pussy like a clown car just isn't rational thinking.

Good well written story with solid substance from start to finish, well done, a completely rounded story

We have a winner!!! A love story in the midst of a cheating wife tale: well done.

Did his parents attend the wedding and how did Wendy afford to keep the house.Also what did he do for a job,did he still work at his father's firm?.

Nitpic, that's explained in part 2.

Good story

I am glad there is a part two, there are a few unanswered questions, but this tale seems almost finished. The details desired are actually before the second wedding, like career after being in the family business...

With such a large, involved, profoundly sexual event, knowing more of what slut-wifey is thinking and feeling can really add to the story, or why she strayed to begin.. Slut as a person makes a better character than slut as a slut.

Sarah works as a character and is interesting and quite sweet. She deserves more time as well.

Off to read chapter 2, you may have anticipated this reader's thoughts.

This is a farce, right? I mean, it's just so... over the top that it reads like satire, including the corny and stilted dialog.