All Comments on 'A Stitch in Time Saves Nine Ch. 01'
by ElonPaul
- 4 Comments
nthusiasticalmost 6 years agoWay too many run-on sentences make it nearly impossible to read. I must assume you know what you are trying to say, however, you've made it clear as mud to me. It's like some kind of babbling stream of consciousness.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoIt has promise, but you do need an editor to sort out the run-ons and misspellings.
ElonPaulalmost 6 years agoAuthorThis has been updated with the help of an editor. The next chapter has been sent to the editor, so it should be out here soon
ElonPaulabout 5 years agoAuthorThe story will be rebooted (sort of) you need not re read if you don't wanna because it would more or less be the same although the writing style will be different.
Will quickly post first few chapters before settling into a routine. Still No Editor so please bear with me.
Anyways by may 19 i plan to give out as much material as i can hopefully i am able to
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