All Comments on 'A Stockholm Love Story Pt. 01'

You have such a good sense of place and pace. I'm very much looking forward to the rest of your tale.

What can I say? You never let us down, Shaima. Your characters, your settings, are always so real and believable and this story is promising much. I'm confident that you'll deliver and I'm happily anticipating Part 2. As an aside, loved Moira's comment about kindergarten being negotiating ground for miniature terrorists.

(Do Swedes really buy IKEA goods? I thought they exported them all with garbled instructions to bamboozle foreigners.)

I do so love your stories, and this one no exception, wonderful . You take your time in introducing us to your characters, so they feel like friends. I'm enjoying the POV from Sigrid and the weaving of Swedish words and phrases through, it's adding to the realism you always have in your work.

Moira and Sigrid seem to have a connection so I am interested in seeing where you take this. I love the phrase 'toe dipper'. Please continue this as it has me hooked.

Thank you

Jc

I thought this was a good start to a good series

Only bit that I didn't like was how Frankie somehow became Maggie toward the end...

Always look forward to your stories and this one is no exception. Nicely paced with plenty of emotion. Look forward to your next chapter

I'm still grinning at the Rod Stewart reference you so casually snuck in there. Good story so far.

You really do have some of the best stories here. xx

I really enjoy your stories, and I'm looking forward to reading more about Moira and Sigrid. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Great story ...... Your writing is brillant ...... Funny romance and the feelings statements thinkings of your characters letting me smile with happiness

I just get drawn to your characters and your wonderful tales. I start a story believing I’m going to enjoy it and end up all warm, fuzzy and shit as I glide through. I can’t get enough so I work my way through everything you’ve published here. I’m closing in on completing my second tour. I hope all is well with you.