All Comments on 'A Story of a Change'

i liked this story very much please continue it would like to see this progress.

Great as a short, fantastic as an opening chapter.

Looking forward to more stories from you!

Very nicely written, although it was not a lengthy story it does not feel unfinished it just radiates a sense of further possibility and promise. Please continue with this story, it is a strong and interesting foundation which presents enough detail to build many more chapters upon.

Nice story, I enjoyed it. Please continue there's room for growth.

please continue this there could be so much more to this story

more please

beautiful.....

i don't know if you plan on continuing but it would be greatly appreciated.

*****

but you did. Wonderful story