All Comments on 'A Stranded Motorist'

by maggie2002

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Praise be Given

nice piece of writing, loved the ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
grammar

This was put together rather quickly I would think. It could use a grammar check. Also, some of the repitition breaks the flow of the story. " . . . into her almost virgin pussy " x2

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