All Comments on 'A Stranger Fills a Need...'

... but I find the change from 2nd person perspective to 1st person a bit disconcerting. However, it is well written.

Calm, assertive, confident.. Love it! But I must agree with Anon, the perspective shift took me out of it a bit..

Thank you both for your comments. My intent was to create a fantasy in a woman's mind, then get INTO that woman's head and show the progression of such in her mind to a fantasy becoming reality (which is quite hot for me!). But if that change from second to first person distracts the reader, all is lost, as the goal is to make the reader hot! Thanks for helping with the learning experience.

Masterfully written and enjoyed. A need deep within. I felt it, which says a lot. Loved!