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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesalmost 6 years ago
United Airlines!

Did you think you would sneak that one by us, JB? Well, you didn't get it by me [at least not yet ;-)]! Great story! Really enjoyed it! Distracted me from my IRA account! But, quite honestly, a welcome distraction! Five stars! Well done! Thanks!

And, in case you are curious, I identified most closely with Ernie! He had a minor role but also had Beatrice, someone I could realistically fantasize about! Ashley is quite fetching but much too young for me to credibly fantasize about!

prinnaveaprinnaveaover 5 years ago
A string of

Minor Disasters. 1&2 get 5*

I find the story very enjoyable. Whimsical, but fun, hopefully you keep this going :))

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great voice

You have a character.who is also quite a narrator. I hope you continue. To work with her. Quite fun.

ravishmentravishmentalmost 5 years ago

Great story. Loved it.

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