All Comments on 'A Stringed Instrument Ch. 03'

Okay, I'm officially your fan. I love, love, LOVE your style of writing! While there wasn't a lot of sex in this, just the sexual tension between them is enough to ... well, you know. ;) Please, please write more. I have to know what happens next. I did say please? ~ L

Boring, redundant and it would have been nice if you included the "This is another slow-moving chapter with more talk than sex." comment in the description. reads like a childs book!

Lovely chapter, very enjoyable story so far! Please write more!

Good character play. Great fun to read. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks

i love how the story slowly develops. can't wait to read the next chapter!

Who ever said this story was boring obviously doesn't know a good story when they see it. Im very stuck on this series and would be very happy if you contiued it!

Thanks all for your kind words! I have several more chapters planned, you'll just have to put up with my snail-like writing speed.

Anonymous: It's not in the description because submission guidelines request that title and description fit in one line, and I was already close to that limit.

Great story. Please continue. 5 stars!

plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!

brilliant please write more i cant wait for the next chapter

Loved that it is 'locally based' even though I'm not from Melbourne I love the fact that it is based there and I get a good feeling about knowing the place names, makes it feel more realistic to me. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Sorry about the delay - I've been working a second job the last month and it's left me with no time for writing, but I'm hoping to finish part 4 in the next couple of weeks. Have to pay the bills, alas!

You are totally awesome

Home Run. Or maybe a touchdown....I don't know, but it came at a wonderful time and was just right. A very fun introduction to hot.

I love this story... It's intelligent and sexy.

Wonderful slow burn, loving it!

J

Like a warm glass of milk on a chilly night, warming you throughout!

L

Very nice. Sweet actually.

That cricket bit was awesome!

I'll admit I'm a yank, and don't know anything about cricket, but it was still a good addition. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Lol the cricket part... I actually read this story years ago but restarting it now...

Yes that saved the aweful mens sentences about gay women ....... But the two this feels emotional reduced into techies area ...... We will see how hard it is to stringe the instrument perfectly

Loved the cricket scenario.

No doubt you will remember the most famous on air gaffe in cricket - "The bowlers Holding, the batsman's Willey"

I'm liking this story a lot! The cricket commentary part is delightful.