by Bramblethorn
Yeah live and different heights ...... Like in climbing rocks or eating tasteful or sexuality or success ........ Your writing is taking me easily with your journey you enfold and i feel like being part of this ...... Great
Glasgow fishwife operatic soprano, now there's an idea to conjure with. Says a Glaswegian
That last scene brought such a smile to my face, I ought to thank you only for that! But there's so much more, the slow pace of the narrative, with currents in increasing frequency, just love it.
These two continue to make me smile and hope for more - both of them and for them!
J
This is a joy to read... and thanks for introducing me to Einsturzende Neubauten - Black Swan ( Sabrina ), which is a fantastic song.
After you mentioned it and I couldn't recognize it, I found it on YouTube and listened to it, while reading the rest of this chapter.
Fantastic, as I said :)
I started reading this series today. It is incredible. And while the sexy times are great it is your storytelling that truly shines. I'll review more later. Time to read the next chapter!
Started reading your series yesterday - beautiful writing style, I love the way that you slowly build up the story. I DON'T WANT IT TO END!!!
Thanks all for the feedback! I finished the first draft of Chapter 6 today; my beta-reader is busy for a few days, but it should be up in about a week with any luck.
sensual mixed with a beautiful sense of humour - what more can you ask for!?! - i absolutely loved the rock climbing part - It almost felt as if i was there too. thank you for taking me along.
can't wait to see how the story continues.
<3 all the way from Germany
There had better be more chapters to come. This story has got body and life and I'm keen to see how it all pans out. Cheers!
wonderfully engaging story that gave some life to the characters & was very erotic at the same time. looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice scenes. Loved the rock climbing. Lovely interchanges. Looking forward to more. Thanks
Not exactly how I pictured using ropes and blindfolds. Ha ha! Absolutely lovely, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I will, though, of course ... as long as you need me to. :) ~ L