All Comments on 'A Striptease for Daddy'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sick

You are a sick little numpty, you perve!

WirdSmiffWirdSmiffabout 5 years ago
Not quite as good as it could have been

A pity the daughter didn’t deliberately leave the phone and passwords for her Daddy to discover. Lots of potential with her driving him nuts.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakabout 5 years ago
Misleading title

The title of the story is misleading. You make it sound like there will be an actual act by her with her daddy. Instead, it's all just daddy's fantasy. Wasn't impressed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Going places?

@ 3.99, I nearly skipped it—glad I didn’t. Well done—do more, this story clearly has possibilities.

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A guy who enjoys erotic writing. I try to create realistic characters and plausible plots I would like to experience myself, but always aim to explore out of the ordinary situations!