All Comments on 'A Stroll in the Woods Ch. 02'

He moves super fast that one.

It seemed to move a little too fast but I await further installments.

I don't know what your previous writing experiences have been but all the words, thoughts, visuals, emotions and feelings appear to come together easy for you. I don't agree with others; for a short story, it was Not paced too fast. What it Did Have was just enough thrill, excitement and desire to express very close to how fast a first time experience might evolve. It also leaves the ready "wanting more" ... and that isn't always the case with new authors, and by far superior considering most wanna be erotic 'writers'. We encourage you to continue, as I see you already have. You easily earned five proud and firmly erect Cocks (5- Stars)

i thought this was really cute! wish there was more!