All Comments on 'A Submissive at Heart Ch. 03'

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GoodhueGoodhueover 8 years ago
Going Downhill Fast!

That's it for that relationship.Michelle will end up leaving with Mark for London."James Bond" will have a bond alright,about 12 inches up the ass nightly.

Should have quit,after chapter 2, while you were ahead!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
This isn't sexy, erotic or even interesting.

The guys turns gay, she's a total skank hosebag and the writer has shit for brains. Nuff said.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Stupid shit

There is no turn on value in this story. Sorry I read it

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11over 10 years ago
You're not done yet!

Your fans are all waiting on a chapter four.

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
Hmmm, a gay live in lover..................

I know your bi, just from your story. Having a short term gay top or bottom lover is something I have never heard of. I know some bi bottoms who have sucked off and even been fucked by gay guys, but live in is a new idea to me. I too am interested in how this will work. Will cuckold still get to eat his creampie meal out of his, for lack of a better word, gf? What if Mark wants some more bi sex, will gay lover throw a fit? Lots and questions, so please do tell us what happened.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

this is so hot. I am a man that wants to be the girl in a relationship with men. my wife has turned me into a moaning girl by masturbating me like I am a girl. she ignores my tiny dick and rubs me above it and to the sides, I have never had so many climas and a girls climax is so much better than what I had as a man.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More!

I'm rock hard waiting for more!

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11over 11 years ago
Please continue

I'm looking forward to seeing how the four of them live together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More please!

Hope there's much more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love Your Story

Cannot wait for the next chapter. Would love my wife to take a lover ... and for him to turn me out........ Wife and I would shop for lingerie together. I would wear panties and a feminine robe around the house. Eventually would want each of us to have male lovers.

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