All Comments on 'A Succubus Awakens'

A good read. Would be interesting to see if you take this story further.

i hope you continue with this story. you have intrigued me

I absolutely loved this. Please continue!

...badly edited.

Nice start, quite a nice idea for an origin story but why isn't it fleshed out?

this is an intro and nothing more. Tantalising sure but it needs a bit more to be a decent story worth contending with the halloween stories.

It is a good start of a story. I am intrigued as to where it goes

Please continue

Great story premise and well written