by AquaHolic0120
Looking forward to more. Thanks for making everything wet.
We are looking forward to more chapters of this story, possibly the best we have read here.
Hope to see this story continue with Pam seeing all three guys.
Loved this story and your writing. I like how you skipped the bed scene until later, keeps a level of suspense going.
They need a party on the boat with an old Army buddy or two. Lots of tanning oil.
loved this series, you are a shining light among the mediocrity of writers on this site, please don't leave like most of the other greats have , and please add some more to this series.
Wonderfully crafted and written.rereading reveals more.incites the imagination but also leaves the reader hoping for more.what happens after the oldsters?
Give her more time with Charlie alone in his own house & bed soon!
This series is marvelous. I fervently hope you will continue it.
Thank you all for your kind and complimentary words. I'm so happy that everyone enjoyed seeing lovely Pam transform and the woman within, that she also wasn't aware existed, reveal herself. It's heartwarming to see that my first attempt at writing a story has pleased so many. Because of your wonderful responses, I am informing everyone that this series will continue for a minimum of 4 more chapters, which I will commence posting very shortly. I'll then begin a second project with a new title and Pam and Bob, still the main characters, however, in a completely different setting and location. Thank you all, once again.
Surely they can't only know single men. Add more women or couple please. Otherwise loved the series.
I send you a private message about some suggestions you could consider to write about how Pam would be fucked by all guys in front of her husband on the island. I wonder if you received this ? and if yes I would be very grateful if put some of this ideas to your story. best greetings!
Like someone already mentioned Pam could be seduced by older women too, with big baggy boobs and hairy, musk scented pussies which licking them will make her even hotter than with man.
This story holds all of us old men greatful to some one like Pam. I am sixty four and knowing that someone like you gives me hope my Pam might be right around the courner. Thanks four the hope.
The character of Bob has evolved to that of a complete moron and idiot. The getting drunk deliberately part was bad enough, but the "cuck" character greatly exceeds my tolerance --- even in literature.