All Comments on 'A Summer of Slow Transition Ch. 09: Final'

This was an excellent story! Well written and constructed. A unique and refreshing style. As I read each chapter I began to realize that each was like it's own separate and individual glass of fine wine, it had to be sipped, to discover the subtle flavors of each. The more I drank, the more I wanted. Excellent piece of work. I hope there are more stories on the horizon from you. Great Job! 5 stars, all the way.

Hi!

I must say that I really enjoyed this series, particularly the beginning. I really like all that teasing and slowly, slowly moving on.

Great writing and editing, too.

I'd love to read another story! Really!

Maybe a setting like this: Wife and husband visit small hometown for a college reunion, and there she meets her old boyfriend or a former teacher aswell.

Or some teasing at a tub party or some strip poker; all would be nice!

this was a fabulously erotic story with great pace and timing. Hope we see more. Perhaps she will visit the beach again and see Curlew? thanks for your efforts.

You created a fantastic series here and I hope that you do continue with Pam and Bob's story. Pam has a need to help lonely old men and I'm sure Bob is down with whatever that might entail. Good job writing these stories and thank you. I hope to read more in the future!

I think it would be interesting to explore a deeper relationship with Hank. One where she is REALLY reluctant & perhaps he introduces her to guys she really does not like, but...

GREAT story!

Thanks

Thank you for the series!

any man of any age could have Pam now. She doesn't even like Hank and he can fuck her or her ass just by rubbing her thigh. Also that 30 something guy from the beach will probably be next on this whore's list. When she goes off the pill...well the kids could be anyones!

well full marks for the attempt to write something other than a quick wham bam action piece but I have to say that there could have been a little more sex and a little more deviation from the usual stereotypical innocent young wife quickly complying with her husband's desires to have a slut wife in a 62,400 word epic like this. Nice try though

I liked it but wanted the wife to betray Bob. Pls add more intimate,raw and raunchy stuff.

Like the series title promised, this story arc has been a long, slow burn.

Fantastic!

Plenty of healthy communication, respect, and measured steps. Just enough of an indulgent release on her part to draw us in. Plenty of directions this could go and I'd read any of them.

Well done!

Loved it, though Bob always saying he loves Pam even more after each time she does something naughty takes away from it. Now, if he said he ‘appreciates’ her more, that would be more realistic. That bit aside, Pam and Bob are a fun, enjoyable couple and I could read about a great many of their adventures. It would be good to see Pam expand her sexual fun and include an occasional younger, more robust guy in her sexy fun. Someone who can go several hours with her and really put her through her paces. Definitely more adventures with the old guys though.

Charlie & Walter have no children , how about she stops the birth control and lets Charlie & Walter try and impregnate her ?!? I'm 64 now and wish i had a neighbor like Pam !

enjoyed this tale very much,,pam is no dummy,,she has to live in that neighborhood and wants to be respected,,lucky bob to have such an astute sexually mature wife and only 20 years old,,she know her wants and needs,,many adventures ahead for her and puppy dog bob will follow along with stars in his eyes,,,lololol,,

This was a fantastic story that I loved very very much! It is very close to the fantasies that makes me wet when I am alone. I loved the focus on the age differences. Thank you soooo much for sharing this!