All Comments on 'A Summer on the Road Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
loosing it

can't reach my ass?

the story is loosing any semblance of connection to reliability...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Shame "Anonymous" ...

... is even unable to spell 'losing'!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Reality

Reality is that subconsciously she is seducing him. So of course she can't reach her shapely ass and need her hot instructor to make it feel better. Learn to spell and to read between the lines.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very good

Keep it up. Much better than most of the stories here.

mammoetmammoetabout 7 years ago
great story

i hope to read Pt.04 soon 5*

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticabout 7 years ago
Finally Pt. 03!

I thought this story had fallen into the pit of oblivion ...

Fortunately, it has not been so.

I love this story, it is sweet, with touches of tenderness and sadness, but with a promising future. I think Jane's mother knows about this future much more than Paul and Jane themselves ...!

Waiting for the next chapter to arrive soon.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Five stars, hope to read the next chapter very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good but need part 4 soon

Please post sooner.

doofus67doofus67about 7 years ago
Aaaaahhh, what a place to stop!

No, seriously, it's a great story to date and i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Hopefully there's a comfy cushion in the cab, she's gonna need it! 5*

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
I didn't see that coming

That she came back for "a helping hand" brings up serious issues.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Dangerous territory. Well the threat was there and she deserved it but he did lose control.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

as previous comment...please continue

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