by cerrotorre
Pretty please!
These just aren't long enough 😫
I just start getting into them and they finish!!!
Could Paul and Jane become a real couple and consider dating and marriage? Vera seems to think so, and Paul's children seem to like Jane. And God knows they fit together fine! Give sexy Paul a bit of chest hair for his manly and muscular chest. I am really rooting for them to be together!
This is a cute tale and you have a story to tell. You will improve with practice and you'll get a different slant on people and events but please keep on writing. You're building up to some sexual tension
Yeah, ok, this is erotica. But I am disappointed that he couldn’t keep his promise.