All Comments on 'A Summer on the Road Pt. 07'

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rightbankrightbankalmost 7 years ago
the social conundrum is back

They have been doing fine in their micro world of the Volvo cab. The 20th birthday party will be another set of issues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Looking for LOVE

2 things, no 3. 5 stars again. I was hoping at least 1 of them would say I Love You by now. Last, I'm enjoying this a lot and i hope you can find the time in your life to get the final chapters out soon. OK, number 4, I'm really hoping for a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Five stars again, next chapter very soon please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hoping...

So many things I want to see in the story. A happy ending, a lasting and loving romance that leads to marriage )?), and fuller description of Paul -- I still imagine some hair covering that muscular chest and abs, and last, a father's blessing on what Jane wants from Paul. It sounds as if Paul's daughters could easily be brought on board. Keep them loving each other. Keep writing!

General_OGeneral_Oalmost 7 years ago
More

Please continue great writing love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Enjoyable story

Thanks for a "real" story. These circumstances are possible. Love love love your choices throughout this story.

Thank you so much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Love this story- more please

Nice story about real people

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
next chapter please

Grand story do hope there will be a follow on chapter, chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice

Can't wait for next chapter

Am looking by this one alot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Here is an idea

Maybe finish the bloody story before you start posting the chapters

Making readers wait months on end between is an insult.

Get your shit together ffs

Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Good. Next instalment could be interesting.

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Dear readers, Part 8 and the final chapter of A Summer of Submission has been submitted for review. In it, Julie's friend comes for a visit and arrives earlier than expected. A big surprise awaited. I hope you enjoy it. From some of the comments I gather this story is no...

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