by cerrotorre
They have been doing fine in their micro world of the Volvo cab. The 20th birthday party will be another set of issues.
2 things, no 3. 5 stars again. I was hoping at least 1 of them would say I Love You by now. Last, I'm enjoying this a lot and i hope you can find the time in your life to get the final chapters out soon. OK, number 4, I'm really hoping for a happy ending.
So many things I want to see in the story. A happy ending, a lasting and loving romance that leads to marriage )?), and fuller description of Paul -- I still imagine some hair covering that muscular chest and abs, and last, a father's blessing on what Jane wants from Paul. It sounds as if Paul's daughters could easily be brought on board. Keep them loving each other. Keep writing!
Thanks for a "real" story. These circumstances are possible. Love love love your choices throughout this story.
Thank you so much.
Grand story do hope there will be a follow on chapter, chapters
Maybe finish the bloody story before you start posting the chapters
Making readers wait months on end between is an insult.
Get your shit together ffs