All Comments on 'A Summer with the McCoys Ch. 09'

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Flymaster60Flymaster60over 12 years ago
nicely done

Nice story line..... Very well done... I hope there will be more chapters

jkrauserjkrauserover 11 years ago
more

This story line could use a good dozen + chapters...it is really good so far!

OU812bf342OU812bf342almost 11 years ago
Good Beginning

A very good start kind of lost track when Bella first knew about Vicky then not but other than that good story with lots of action. I can see a budding relationship with Sarah he really seems taken with her. As for whoring him out I could see him getting pretty disgusted there. Sex should be free without coercion and NO means NO.

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 7 years ago
fantastic

love to read some more of this lovely story

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