All Comments on 'A Surprise Encounter'

you forgot to let him teach her how to suck cock,stories always need a good blowjob in them, lol.

Indeed. What a nice, happy story. I would have liked a boy Brianna was sweet on to come looking for her, having noticed she took the left fork, and discovered our narrator and her in flagrante delicto. However, that would have led to a much longer story, and ruined your concept of a story in a box. So, all in all, very well done! 5* ~~JBE