by _Savannah_
Just stumbled across this one. Savanah, you can write your ass off! Great job on the characters' involvement and placement, delving in and out of the action sequences. Nice hint. Nice twist.
Sweet descriptions and wording placed timely throughout...you worked it, girl!
I would've prefered to have read more details on the anal or orgasmic dialogue and narrative, but that only leaves me intrigued to read more of your works.