All Comments on 'A Surprise Threesome'

do finish off soon loved the story more

loved the story until the last paragraph, didn't have to do the last three sentences was great besides that

you've got to tell more of what happened!

I have to agree with the previous commentator. Great story until the long term girlfriend decides to blackmail her boyfriend... how is that sexy? immediate boner killer.

Thanks for your feedback. I am not an experienced author and thought the blackmail element would be a good way to keep the story alive. However, I do now accept that the story doesn't need this ending and would be happy to remove the final paragraph. If anyone knows if this is possible and, if so, how I can do it please let me know. Thanks.

The Lit folks will process it as a correction and replace the old version with the new.

I loved this story! Very stimulating, and well paced. Are there more?

This story is amazing, please continue it 😃