All Comments on 'A Taboo Affair'

Not even a good stroke story, but very gay

First, it would be a good thing to know how to punctuate. You obviously are very uneducated in that area. Second, you are so full of cliches that you believe they are important for stimulation. Third, use words that are in the dictionary. Finally, you exposed your own ignorant, infantile wishes with your last statement, "Once you have tried black you never go back" (sic). That is a stupid statement that reveals the insecurity of one wanting to believe that it's true. Everyone but you knows that bigger is often NOT always better, that a black penis feels the same as any other color, that it's only a black man's myth that they are any better in bed (or bigger in size) than any other man. You are so full of yourself you are deluded.

I love it when some asshole troll gets caught chastising a writer for not spelling correctly or poor grammer, (as if a troll would know). Just look at this sad example of a second grade education in the comment prior to mine.

I read a lot of erotic stories and although I am not qualified as a bonafide critic, the story was good in my opinion.

YOu have helped to destroy your own race you dumb fucking cracker.

I so liked your story i cum three times reading it. Of course i had to us a toy but i almost felt like i was getting some black cock from Jason. I have never had a black cock but i want one so bad now. Lately hubby has been bringing his golf buddy home with him and we flirt a lot. And his buddy is black and when we dance his cock feels so big i want it so bar. Keep writing thest stories i just love them and thanks for it. Annmarie

you have some editing problems. It's very disconcerting when you move back and forth from the third person, as in "John couldn't believe his eyes," and then finish that same sentence in the third person: "when I saw Jason watching my wife sunbathe." This happens numerous times.

<br><br>I'm assuming that "pashing" means kissing? Or perhaps french kissing? I've never heard that particular phrase before. Later on, they were "mashing" their lips together. I have to say, the visual of two people mashing their lips together is not really erotic. I'm sure you wanted to convey the passion of the moment, but another phrasing might work better, such as "I kissed her wildly," or "our kiss grew sloppy and wild." <br><br>

But ignore those who freak out over interracial sex. They apparently find it obscene, yet not so obscene that they can skip over a story that contains it. In fact, methinks they doth protest too much!

Pimping Watching Jacking off - the are all signs of a cuckster which will ruin any story let along a good interracial one.<P>

A pathetic excuse for a man and father(?) isn't erotic - just sick male humiliation eh matie.<P>

Good writing is always defeated by a male seeking his own disrespect - kinda like having his wife shoot him because it makes him so excited - weird shit cuckster. Subhuman and below most every fetish.<P>

So get some help sick one - it's that damned island virus afflicting the isles again. Then you gotta know if the bazzzster likes it that it is a disgusting wimpy cuckster story with him wanting to be in the lead.

Spelling errors are distracting. Use a spell checker.

Very poorly constructed story. Nothing, however, that an editor couldn't fix up. It was difficult to follow as you kept switching from first to third person, and many other mistakes.

Editing aside, you wrote a good story. That's the hard part. Getting an editor is the easy part.

I enjoyed this story so much because my wife and I were envolved in a similar situation. One evening after a lot of teasing, my friend got to fuck her. Being a single guy he was at our house a lot both before and after having sex with her. After it got really fun. I was ok with him having her just about anytime he wanted, and of course any time she wanted to. Good times.

Thanks for the trip down memory lane.

One is a racist and the other just hates stories about cuckolding. You poor excuses for human beings need each other. Get over your limited mental capabilities and open your sad immature and narrow little minds. This site is for mature adults who enjoy erotica and sexuality of many flavors. The story was good despite that it could do with some grammatical improvement.

All in all it was that good. You worked hard I can tell, but I am not sure it was ready for the web. I would think you'd at least proof read before you post.

But that's just me. Keep working at it you can only get better.

Thank's for nothing

I love it from start to finish , you made it seem so real please write many many more :).

And that's mainly 'cause no white man would ever touch a nigger lovin' white cum slut again

I could neva go back after having black. The stretch and the burn totally gets me off.

Puke

Kolejna opowieść o idiocie i dla idiotów. Nie ta kategoria.

This is just a story, However,Because of; "I suppose you could say that both Jenny and I are a little racist and even a little bigoted in that we brought up both of our daughters to believe that they should only go out with white men.They are both married to white guys and we have two grand children." I knew of a very liberal couple who pushed their only daughter to date exclusively black guys. They regretted having done this when their daughter kept calling them to bail her out of jail charged with prostitution... Their daughter eventually came down with A.I.D's and died. Her black husband was pimping her out.