All Comments on 'A Tale for the Middle Ages Pt. 03'

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bongo_furybongo_furyover 8 years ago

Great story. Patiently waiting for the next chapter.

NightthawkNightthawkover 3 years ago

Highly improbable, but very interesting! I am totally invested in these characters. You spin a very good tale!

Btw, the sex scenes are perfect!

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 3 years ago

Hmmmm . . . 🤨

You’re doing an excellent job of making this plausible. Though I’m a very heterosexual woman, I’ll admit I’ve occasionally admired another woman’s body as a purely esthetic exercise, however I’ve never been sexually attracted . . . yet.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Excellent. You're handling a messy situation in a loving manner. So well written.

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Dear readers, Part 8 and the final chapter of A Summer of Submission has been submitted for review. In it, Julie's friend comes for a visit and arrives earlier than expected. A big surprise awaited. I hope you enjoy it. From some of the comments I gather this story is no...