All Comments on 'A Tale for the Middle Ages Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
GREAT STORY - GOOD FINISH

I have read it all and you were right about starting with the initial piece.

I have enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bravo

Loved this story Feels like there is room for more adventures sexual games between this threesome. You know how to bring on the heat Thankyou thankyou thankyou!!!

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 3 years ago

But What About the Winter Vacation?

What if Shannon can go with them sailing? Wouldn’t that be fun for all?

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

A little weird but a great story. Think you've found a good stopping point and a satisfactory conclusion although you have left enough pointers for a follow up story. Did they have the sailing holiday? What happened with Melina's and the racing next year? How did Shannon get on with her studies, did she become a sick child specialist.

5⛤ as ever.

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Dear readers, Part 8 and the final chapter of A Summer of Submission has been submitted for review. In it, Julie's friend comes for a visit and arrives earlier than expected. A big surprise awaited. I hope you enjoy it. From some of the comments I gather this story is no...

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