All Comments on 'A Tale of Loss and Lust'

Keep going with your lusty ideas and receive votes in your favor ;)

I liked reading your story. As always you've been best to mix up romance and sex in rhythm.

I've voted for each and every story you've posted here. Can't wait long for your next title :)

Oh it was a great story. I liked the scene most with five beauties in the chamber. Please keep on doing such yummy stories :)

Do post more of this story and dont stop doing that! :)

I felt sorry for the poor husband (male character), but must say you portrayed a unique idea about how those two beauties got married in the end. Should I ask if you are planning a sequal?

I greatly enjoyed reading your story. It made me feel as if I was making love to the redhead. I couldn't stop an urge to finger myself and then telling my gf to read this story. She got aroused as she went on following me. Then we had some hot sex. I must thank you for heating us with your literary work :)

Shane Peters.

Count me one of your fans. I should say, I love your stories.

Pauline.

Nevertheless your plot was ravishing!

... but it is erotic as well.

In a second chapter Selena should get pregnant.

I admire your ability to tame the English language for your creative expression. The story is fun to read as well as being erotic and intelligent.

A few of the many sentences that are standouts for me:

Christopher made {lingual twirls} on his wife's pink bud, sending sparks of lust through her spine.

Selena moaned as Christopher dived his face into her salty, {cuntal folds}.

All the women stood around the {supine hottie}, staring at her in silence.