by buzzinga
I admire who has the imagination to write, but I'm always honest about my comments. My comments are never against the writer, just about the story and the people in the story...I know in the world there are stupid people, but the ones in this story (the 2 until now...) are more stupid than possible. Try to fix it in the next part...
I would like more detail. What did the doctor do for her daughter? How did he know about her husband cheating? What are the circumstances for her marriage? One other comment, the doctor did not 'convict' her of adultery, he accused her.
Mitch
Imposible and unnecessary exaggerations spoil this and many other Literotica submissions.
your short note about the tale said a women gets her freedom. I did not know
becoming a slut was called freedom.
Those things are great. This story was awful. Is she a complete moron?