All Comments on 'A Tale of Submission Ch. 02'

... if you hadn't made a favourite of your own story. You should have more faith in your abilities than to pull a cheap stunt like this. Nice story, but only four stars.

Great contination of first story! Lei lets herself be easily seduced and abused by Fiii, and now she willingly falls for Grant who adds a painful and almost sadistic spice to the series' flavor. Lei couldn't be that innocent and yet slutty; but, she is. What more can happen to her in the next chapter? Keep writing!