All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Cats Ch. 01'
by ArcherBaby
- 17 Comments
Bainsidheover 13 years agoThank you, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I like the way you make your characters more real, to me at least. I look forward to any new chapters or any other submitions from you. A great first start.
Anonymousover 13 years agoA new story ... this one is going to be great. I already love the characters Artemis and Gabriel are going to be great together. What ti don't like is that Artemis father is forcing her to marry and that he doesn't give a damn. hope you remedy that in the future. I can't wait until the next chapters to see what you have in store for these two. like i already said great story and i can't wait to read more.
donaldeover 13 years agoit was a very interesting story i did really enjoy it and can not wait for next chapter . i think it will be interesting when dad and daughter do meet again almost feel sorry for the old man lol not
kitten101over 13 years agoSo, I don't want to sound like a crazy person here, but this story has some elements that are unusually (uncomfortably??) similar to one of mine - A Cat Among Wolves...
I'm sure it's just one of those totally weird co-incidences, but you might want to read my story, and just double-check that your own doesn't copy it too closely!!
Blueheart0over 13 years agoThis is a nice start to your story. Kitten 101 is right on, however, as there is a similar element and I agree with her recommendation that you read her story so that you can make sure that yours does not emulate hers anymore than it already does.
I have to say though that it is very refreshing to see a story on the site that has been throughly edited.
Good luck and keep writing.
Ayamiover 13 years agolove it keep goin cant wait for the next one to come out let me know wen u have more please
halb302over 13 years agothis is amazing i have been on literotica only a little while but this story has great pootentail if u choos to continue please choose to continue it i love it!
Anonymousover 13 years agokitten101: a cat among wolves. story is finished and has the SAME but better written plot :P
Anonymousalmost 13 years agothis is an amzing story, but if you wait much longer, people will get fed up with waiting for the second chapter and will stop looking for it.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoHi I was just wondering when chapter two is going to be uploaded? I just read this and it's very interesting already. I would like to see this evolve into something more than a two page story
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoNice read. And totally unoriginal. Its clearly a rewrite of A Cat among wolves. Changing a few words does'nt make it yours.
