All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Mothers Pt. 05'

I loved this story, from start to finish. I feel almost like I know the characters now, and would wish all of them the best of luck in the future! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!

For this wonderful series. Loved it all

Brilliant.

I am impressed about how you could keep both stories apart from one another, and I would love to find out how I could get the book once you put the 2 stories together, I only have one thing, I wish this would have been longer than 2 pages

This has been a very fine double series and I really admire the way you've kept it all together. Good luck on merging the stories into a novel.

You never disappoint! Thank you so much for another fantastic story. Many thanks and much love.

What a great series, you have a knack for capturing the honest voice of the narrator and enveloping your readers in her world. Thank you from a proud Aussie, you are a treasure

Absolutely loved this series! Great writing style and such an amazing story. Only I’m a little confused as to what the other serie is that is mentioned both at the beginning of this chapter and in the comments...

I had to come back and re-read this story, and I loved it all over again. Thank you so much for sharing these with us!

Just wonderful

I don't want to mimic your other fans but you are a very talented writer. I'm a long way from running out of reading material. Thanks for keeping me interested to the degree that I feel the need to continue reading the remainder of your work.

I have just finished I think one of best stories written on here. Tells a beautiful story and gives in site. I would like to know more about the developing relationship and family. Thank you for writing.

Combining "the courtship of rachel and a tale of two mothers" reading them cross one tale ofter another is fabulous ..... You might had mixed them together in one long story but getting behind your intentions its enchanting ...... Thank you for this pleasure to read this lovely story

I simply loved these interwoven tales. Thank you for this wonderous story. I will eagerly read your remaining works. Truly thank you for sharing you amazing writing prowess.

Such a stong story and weaved so well.

A beautiful story! Thanks, Shaima. OK. You manage to touch my heart and making me aroused, even if I feel like I’m peeling into someones lives. Your characters are so realistic and vivid. I get emotionally involved in these women, despite their orientation (I’m a middel aged man and I know these women never can be more than a fantasy to me). Well… perhaps «despite» isn’t the right word. Maybe «because» is a more appropriate word. Oh well… I’m babbling. Nevertheless, love is love and we should all cherish it, regardless of the form it takes.

Could it be that this author is simply a lesbian feminist who has an aversion to heterosexual relationships in general? Then she should take note that the Creator created her as male and female, as Adam and Eve and not as Eve and Evi! And believe me, he thought something of it!