All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Paramours Ch. 02'

You made me feel like I was there. Jessica is so quirky and hot.

Some of this was hard to get ahold of. Why would someone desire slutty talk with degrading names? What was her thing about not lip kissing, and why did it change? Jessi's personally, including her obsession with her professor and her competition

with Jessika, seemed a bit psycho. But it was interesting, attention getting/holding, and maybe that was partly due to having the twisted or strange stuff.

Why did he reveal things about his time with Jessika, instead of a rejoinder like,."How would you feel if I told what you and I did together? Give another woman the same privacy." But, there again, it was more intriguing as written.

Their awkwardness at times, transferred to the reader.

One thing is certain: Jessi, and sex with her, was decidedly different than Jessika. Chapter 2 was not a rehash of chapter 1. And that bodes well for the many chapters ahead.

Paul in Oklahoma

mouth off of my erection. off of??? white trash!