All Comments on 'A Tale to Tell: Waikiki'

You give great text! I really like your style and your sense of story development! Truly anticipating your next installment :)

Great story. I'm sure there is more to tell. We look forward to the next chapter.

Great story. Very real. Seemed entirely possible. Cute and yet discrete -- just like a girl would really be. Loved it.

Okay, the surfer bit reminded me of a vacation commercial. The one where the guy booking the trip is picturing his vulnerable wife being taught surfing and the teacher-dude is looking at her like she's edible. "...You're a natural..." It was a funny spot, especially when his imagination drives him book a vacation for the desert somewhere. . . . ...I sense the story of Lisa is coming to a head. So to speak. I'm really looking forward to seeing how. The easy way would be... well, the easy way. I think people are ready for the "money shot." ...Alternately, you could keep dancing around it. That might keep it more real, but there's a certain momentum and expectation that I think the audience wants to see. This is fantasy, after all. . . . Whatever you do, it's already couched in a story we can connect to on a very real level. We like the characters, we like the action, and it's going to be a pleasure following their adventures, whatever direction they steer them.